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Yoinn
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since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

0 posted 2009-08-19 10:01 PM

poetry...

what is left
after i wipe my tears
from the paper.

Yoin

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2009-08-19 10:04 PM

Profound. I am reminded that there is poetry in all of life, and tears can be joy as well as sorrow. Striking write.

Yoinn
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since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

2 posted 2009-08-20 12:46 PM

Thank you TD. Poetry reflects all sides, all colors, tears and laughter, honesty and deceit. In other words, as you pointed out, it reflects "life".

Yoin

Never do injustice to a man who isn't afraid to die because of it. - Yoin

viking_metal
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since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

3 posted 2009-08-20 06:08 AM

truef. You the man.
I think you should re-post the good old boy side poem.

Do it.

Paul

I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really.

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2009-08-20 06:27 AM

thanks yoinn, violent and true and sometimes unpleasant to share.

yann

brneyedgrly
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since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

5 posted 2009-08-20 08:01 AM

really like this yo

and a poem belongs to the poet and

he can do with it what he wishes

berney

crosscountry83
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since 2009-07-30

Posts 345

6 posted 2009-08-20 08:27 AM

VERY true, especially for me. Thanks for putting in such poetic words.

Rileigh

Yoinn
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since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

7 posted 2009-08-20 10:49 AM

Hey will do Pauldawg. Thanks for the reply.

Yoin

Never do injustice to a man who isn't afraid to die because of it. - Yoin

Yoinn
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since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

8 posted 2009-08-20 10:50 AM

Thanks Yann

Yoin

Never do injustice to a man who isn't afraid to die because of it. - Yoin

Yoinn
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since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

9 posted 2009-08-20 10:53 AM

Glad you liked it Berney.

hmmm I think once a poem is shared it becomes joint custody. In a non-legal sorta way.

Yoin

Yoinn
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since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

10 posted 2009-08-20 10:54 AM

Your welcome Rileigh. Glad you liked it.
Now if I could just learn to leave some laughter on the page to wipe off.

Yoin

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

11 posted 2009-08-20 12:24 PM

Not only did I appreciate your poem, but I appreciated the comments that you wrote as well. Oh, and the comments of your readers!

Linda

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

12 posted 2009-08-20 12:32 PM

What is left is the work of a fine poet, Yoinn.
Ida

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

13 posted 2009-08-20 01:50 PM

Poetry~what is left after your heart has bled all out of ink~

The very essence of you~Yoinn

~ARH

Yoinn
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since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

14 posted 2009-08-20 11:21 PM

And I appreciate every time you respond to my posts Linda. thank you.

Yoin

Yoinn
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since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

15 posted 2009-08-20 11:23 PM

Your praise warms me Ida, more than you know. thanks again for repling

Yoin

Yoinn
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since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

16 posted 2009-08-20 11:23 PM

You got that right ARH. you sure got that right. thanks for responding.

Yoin

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