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There Beyond (Shadow Sonnet PW)
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There Beyond (Shadow Sonnet PW) |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
We were always meant to be you see Glee just fills my heart for all to see When your hands touch me I feel again When we touch my head begins to spin I would never try to question why I have never felt the need to cry You bring me up when I’m feeling blue True is what I’ll always be to you Fate has set us on each other’s plate Great love seems to always wait for fate Games are played in love's beloved name Maim my heart, oh lovely fateful game One day when you suddenly are gone Wont I’ll be to join you there beyond Arana Darkwolf |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Arana, This is fine work. I like your correct use of "wont". Love Bobby |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A tender love write. It sounds like this is a very special person in your life, someone who makes you happy!  |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
Dear, sweet Bobby, Thank you. I've been trying to work more of the older language into my writing lately. That was my first real attempt. Midnitesun, The person this sonnet was written for is, indeed very important to me, and makes me extremely happy every day. Arana Darkwolf |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello Rachael, I love the poem and its emotions so sincere. yann |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
Thank you, yann. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Arana Darkwolf |
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