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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Why do you Haunt me beauty Invisibly Without warning You so wend Your way Into a mood And leave me With no alternative Except to be in love Oh I have tried To be wise As well I should Keeping sheltered In my solitudes Yet always it seems To no avail Across the sky Above the sea The summer clouds Claim you another victory Sunlight gleaming On snowy sails . |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Smiling at this, how you've been captured. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
VERY fine 'write' ! perfectly precise (crisp) imagery ... especially the ending. MUCH (sustained) applause !! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
very good indeed and questionning...I love the mystery of the relationship between the poet and his occasional muse... have a nice day yann |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
beauty and love....sneaky S.O.B's for sure. Yoin |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Another victory for beauty. How bad can losing be? Ida |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Keeping sheltered In my solitudes" or "Sunlight gleaming On snowy sails" Loving thoughts smiles so beautifully!   Linda |
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