Open Poetry #45 |
The gifts of September |
Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
September is the dreamy month Of soft and mellow days When sunshine spills its seasoned light On barley fields and maize Tinting fruit and gilding leaves On earth without a sound September in her bounteous glory Shares her gifts around The scent of woodsmoke in the air Is carried on the breeze And squirrels busy hoarding nuts Dart quickly through the trees A patchwork quilt of many shades Some subtle, others bold It seems the countryside is clothed In garments dipped in gold A quiet peace steals over all In orchard and in field As Autumn dances through the land To gather Nature's yield As I gaze upon these scenes I feel my spirits rise Inspired by this lovely month Spread now before my eyes |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
This is very beautiful, Heart2Heart. Both, the poem and the picture. I love the Autumn colors. |
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Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311Pluto |
Amazing the sights sounds and aromas just overflow and surround me as I read this lovely write. cheers vic |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Katriona, this is a convincing poem with sweet images and words, there is melody in elements and the description totally fits to autumn moods...Thanks for the superb poem. yann |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Thank you all, I appreciate your replies. Heart2Heart |
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peaceseaker Member
since 2009-07-29
Posts 161 |
Oh Gosh h2h..these vs. are just exquisite..one would be hard pressed to chose a favorite..but I'll tell you what Fall is my favorite time of year, as I was born in September and cannot wait for the season and this truly makes me yearn for it....just lovely my friend...huggs, peaceseaker |
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zaaclindsay Member
since 2009-08-12
Posts 111Ottawa Ontario |
this is nice imagery combined and intermingled with peaceful observations, knit together very softly...like a september morning. zaac |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
It seems the countryside is clothed In garments dipped in gold ________________________________ Can't wait! Beautiful work, K (as always) love you, shel . |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, I knew that this would be another seasonal beauty! My word, Katrioan, it elicited audible 'September sighs' from me all the way through the reading of this splendiferous penning! Linda |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Hi Janet, and thanks for kind words. Yes September is my favourite month as well, not too cold and not too hot and the brilliant colours starting to come through Katriona |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Zaaclindsay, appreciate your words, yes I love those hazy September mornings when the sun finally comes through. Heart2Heart |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Thanks Shellie for stopping by Heart2Heart |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
And that sure is a muchly appreciated reply Linda, thanks m'dear ! Katriona |
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