Open Poetry #45 |
Winter's Breath |
Johan Member
since 2009-05-13
Posts 88Lincolnshire, England U.K. |
Winter's Breath Beneath my feet moonbeams walk Across the heaving ocean's seas Magic snow drifts from the smiling waves Spindrift climbs up the shining lee Weather side, where no man walks But where the singing dark tides talk Intent upon its tremendous strength Along the deck the sea does stalk Just a loose wrong turned wedge Where seas and wind lift the canvas warp Sending hatch boards to the blackened sky Dark shapes as though they fly Albert Ross above the heaving seas A laughing soul no storm can please Waiting, wings that will enfold Those that are lost among the winter storms. |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Fine rhymes and beautiful flow to this immensely lovely poem Johan. I think this is a particularly wonderful verse: "Albert Ross above the heaving seas A laughing soul no storm can please Waiting, wings that will enfold Those that are lost among the winter storms" And Albert Ross is perhaps a vessel then ? Katriona |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Beautiful imagery. I'm not quite ready for winter yet though.... |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Winter is beauty, but beauty comes with a price, strength to endure it.... Enjoyed your poem! ~ARH |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
this is so romantic in the old french sense (not in the romance sense), like lines of Chateaubriand...enjoyed very much the atmosphere and the strength of the words... great work. yann |
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peaceseaker Member
since 2009-07-29
Posts 161 |
Hi Johan...great to read you again...I have to agree with Kat on her favorite vs...as well as I don't think I've seen this one before from you...truly enjoyed....peaceseaker |
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