Open Poetry #45 |
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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 360New Orleans |
I haven't laughed for very long Treading in cold waters It's time I go, time I leave Time to be me, be free You hold us dear with tiresome tactics A leash on my neck with tiresome consequences You'll cry I'll cry Just let me say bye I love you mom Be proud of me? Maybe someday you'll understand Why I leave You'll blame yourself Even if you blame me now You'll blame yourself Be happy mom Remember the days I sang 'You are my sunshine?' Nothings changed, just age. Love you. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." Oscar Wilde |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
very touching. thanks for the read. Yoin Never do injustice to a man who isn't afraid to die because of it. - Yoin |
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peaceseaker Member
since 2009-07-29
Posts 161 |
Oh God, such heart wrenching words...brought a tear to my eye...good writing and raw emotions.....Thanks for sharing....peaceseaker |
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