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In the twilight organza
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In the twilight organza |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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In the twilight organza where you conjure me nightly with the bornagain tulips and the pipedreams of sycamores in the respite of moonlight released to the marigolds with your carnival prayers at the hour of sunset in the harkening hollows seeking lifes orchestration as the flames drain the darkness with the passing regatta etching rhythm and movement to the sea of cortortion. [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (08-19-2009 08:38 PM).] |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
I knew from the title you would stun. That and the fact that you always do. In the twilight organza where you conjure me nightly near the bornagain Love the way you spill. H |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
WOW! You write for the masses |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
rich tapestry of textures and colors. Love the way you think gal!  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Yea, I want to get in your head and see things like you do. Beautifully outrageous writing, blondielocks~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms inki... you make see thru seem too too cloudy...enjoyed your blush here |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
beautiful |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Oh, I'm such a sucker for great imagery, and you nailed it. |
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zaaclindsay Member
since 2009-08-12
Posts 111Ottawa Ontario |
this is quite nice imagery like twilight caught in the moment. the only thing i would do is to space between each thought ang image. it gives it more impact and gives a reader a cue to pause and ponder the wonder of each moment you present. very nicely done. zaac I kept wondering why that frisbee kept getting bigger and bigger....and then it hit me. |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
exquisite goddess |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Absolutel beautiful! I always enjoy reading what you write. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks everyone for stopping by and making me smile a pleasure to see you |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, where do I begin?!? ~ Well, for starters, Dear Goddess, I would like to quote all the responders before me and now, please consider me quoting every line of your exquisite poem ~ as my favourite!    Linda |
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