Open Poetry #45 |
the kiss |
unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
on the fluttered fringes of these skins our breezes are easy chemicals solar licking flares that expose us nudely to our schemes the cells eclipse the voyeurs reduce them to elemental things blood and nerves and jasmine exhaling ballads to ravening lungs impatient for panting warm on wreaths of thirsty sheets where cool was lost to pulses in the bosom of some neural music hovered in this in between cusp of still life breathless endlessly painting our beginning the jealous artists' brushes pale to paint our water colors where hell's fingers cannot snare the virgin's suicide and the criers and howling wolves will lie in soothe of full lipped winds that strip the quivered branches of eyes wide harlot leaves whose undulate oxygen is not sovereign I will part their lips and clamp their eyes if you will give me nothing but to lean in for this kiss H |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms UBP...interesting glisten on the lips here..enjoyed your stark lighting |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Hey Heather, this is truly amazing. It really is a wonderful piece of writing. |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
D Better than in the dark Thank you : ) Jer Thank you for always commenting. Appreciate you. L, H |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
a treat to read your eloquent expression of the simple bliss of kiss that electifies in that magical moment |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
will lie in soothe of full lipped winds that strip the quivered branches of eyes wide harlot leaves ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Goodness, your poem knocked the wind out of me. This rocks, and you roll unbound woman!!! |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Miss Goddess You are the treat. Many thanks. Blues You always make me smile, TY! L, H |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
on the fluttered fringes of these skins our breezes are easy chemicals solar licking flares that expose us nudely to our schemes the cells eclipse the voyeurs ____________________________ wow! you can lay it down, sister hope you are well shel . flesh, blood, bone, love...twisted |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Hey there Thanks, Shel. Been pretty hectic, slackin' on the boards and other things. Hope you are well..? Appreciate your browneyed glance. L, H |
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