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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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The shedding of feathers in a garden of white where once you were King and I played the muse to your fragile extremities as you breathed purple incense in the open air theatre and I was there pouring cabernet by the seashore as latter day stars glittered far, from the shadow of yesterdays but never quite drawing concentric design, with our wings in connect within range of eachother's lone flight pattern. [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (08-16-2009 10:00 AM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
inkedgoddess - pleasure to read your writing... BC |
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Callista Member
since 2008-10-05
Posts 63USA |
Much beauty in spite of the lone flight patterns. Imagine the soaring if otherwise! Cal |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Inkedgoddess, I always enjoy reading your writes. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
birds of the feather, flock together ..... Ct |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Very nice write. Hugs Kimberly |
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ninjawild Junior Member
since 2009-08-11
Posts 33u.s. army |
nice manipulation of words.. great job.. kudos!.. |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
a slice of heaven, goddess  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Beautiful times remembered and savored.. .... long and slow. Your poetry is intoxicating you know!!! |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Well said, and well written. Cool choice of word phrasing, inked. |
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