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Open Poetry #45

Echo in my heart

FNG
Member

since 2006-02-07

Posts 477

0 posted 2009-08-14 12:12 PM

My heart burst with rhythm,
full of passion red,
in sync with love.

A needle pricked,
emptied my heart.

My soul echo loneliness
in the ventricles of my heart.
Searching for traces
that lingers.

None,
resonating,
my echo came back,
bounces off the walls of my heart.

Raw,
fresh,
from the trickling red,
I'm drying off like the desert plane.

amk377
Member

since 2009-08-11

Posts 58
South Carolina

1 posted 2009-08-15 04:19 AM

Wow...I can not believe this has not been responded to! This is awesome...your ability to express your emotion so clearly and yet so smoothly is very cool! great piece!

"we have but a moment...only one moment"

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2009-08-15 05:24 AM

Raw but wonderful anatomy of love's pain.

FNG
Member

since 2006-02-07

Posts 477

3 posted 2009-08-23 08:29 AM

Thanks amk and midnitesun....

appreciate your kind words.

I just felt immense heartache from my recent breakup,

poetry works wonders in healing

FNG
Member

since 2006-02-07

Posts 477

4 posted 2009-08-23 08:37 AM

Thanks amk and Midnitesun for your kind words. was going through a heartbreak and felt intensely about it so i had to write it down....rather raw..

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