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freeze us both in time@ Junior Member
since 2009-06-14
Posts 16 |
Chasing ghosts in the snow Run from it within I miss your caring eyes Though I know not where you’ve been shed your mask in the gloom Though I can not see at all Run from it within prepare that final fall Shattered thoughts collide The deepest ruin wins Chasing ghosts in the snow And run from it within |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You have evoked the Swiss flag colors with this one ... cherry red and snow white. Of course this has nothing to do with the poem itself, but whenever I see the combination of these two colors, my homecountry seems to say hi! So thank you! I think this is a very poignant write, dear "freeze". It makes me think of an inner turmoil that longs to be soothed. Powerful. Love, Margherita |
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freeze us both in time@ Junior Member
since 2009-06-14
Posts 16 |
last two poems are based on drug addiction cherry red/I had that feeling I actually suprised myself as generally there is no specific content or aim of expression within my writing loving all the support from you guys =] and the poetry is incredibly inspiring thank you all peaceNlove |
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freeze us both in time@ Junior Member
since 2009-06-14
Posts 16 |
lovely Margherita it feels so good to hear my writing has been interpreted so sincerely and holds a significance on a personal level may it be the swiss flag =] and may the turmoil be appeased peaceNlove ~freeze~ |
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