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Open Poetry #45

haiku

Yoinn
Senior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

0 posted 2009-08-13 06:47 PM

look on my dogs face
the first snowfall of the year
laughter in his bark

yoin

ninjawild
Junior Member

since 2009-08-11

Posts 33
u.s. army

1 posted 2009-08-13 06:57 PM

pretty good.. it puts an imagery of how it seems sometimes that our dogs do too have a sense of humor..

crosscountry83
Member

since 2009-07-30

Posts 345

2 posted 2009-08-13 07:01 PM

Absolutely delightful!

Rileigh

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

3 posted 2009-08-13 07:20 PM

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Very good

Read again
With your permission, would like to add
this to my Word file of poems by others.
If yes, who shall I show as author?

Again very good

John

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Yoinn
Senior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

4 posted 2009-08-14 09:01 PM

Thank you Ninja, my dog sure makes me laugh.

Yoin

Yoinn
Senior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

5 posted 2009-08-14 09:02 PM

thank you Rileigh,
Its always good to hear from you.

Yoin

Yoinn
Senior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

6 posted 2009-08-14 09:02 PM

Thanks John,

Glad you liked it

Yoin

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