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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere 
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pink subtle, flushed shades of rose shadowed on blushed flesh, trembling at every edge of keepsakes kept in saffron scent of line-dried linen, sunshine seams, beaming at every edge of mirrored bloom, currents co-mingle on humble waters, infectious moon, reflecting at every edge of interrupted time continuum . flesh, blood, bone, love...twisted ~ L. Hall |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You know, I love this one. I am becoming addicted to your poetry. I look for it and want it in a book on my shelf. Know what I mean, bean?  Alison |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
of mirrored bloom, currents co-mingle on humble waters, infectious moon, reflecting at every edge This part is awesome. You write of such depth and emotion. Captivating, Shellie. Cool stuff. |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Very beautiful, Shellie! I, too, love to read your poetry. |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Ah, I love a poet who can say so much with so few (yet well chosen) words. Beautiful! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
I enjoy seeing the woman of you write.. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
...in mirrored bloom... and full admission : ) Ct "You don't have to go |
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ninjawild Junior Member
since 2009-08-11
Posts 33u.s. army |
"of keepsakes kept' idk why but i love this line.. this is a very pleasant read.. great job.. kudos.. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Shellie - your writings are just, well just, u'mmmm just beautiful... BC |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
Very intimate, I likey |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...james |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
ss, I adore how you shared "every edge of interrupted time continuum" with such elegance, grace, and beauty! Loveya! Linda  |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
You just keep getting better. I liked it. Yoin |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
lmao girly! Ali...start printin and here's your glue stick cause the only way my scribbles will be in print is if we paste em in this here notebook! I'll even autograph it for you  You know I'm a beginner and that everything I write is an experiment, right? lol I don't know where to break lines or always get my structure right...but thanks so much for liking something in my writing. It means a lot to me love ya,  shel . flesh, blood, bone, love...twisted |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
What a stunning view from the water's edge. I love the way you write and the subtle style of yours. This was a real treat, girly~ |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
jer thanks so much for all those nice words. you're the best susie thank you sweetheart love you alwye why thank you, talented poetess! ds thank you...when the girl is respected, the woman will often come out to dance Ct no words...just smiles : ) they're contagious : ) ninja yeah...that's just my alliterative brain lol welcome! bc why you're just smooth talkin all the ladies round here! lol love and appreciate you martini glad you did...me thanky james thanks always love, shel |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
hey, thanks to you too beautiful bluesy... appreciate you |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
got sidetracked...blonde lol thank you soul sister linda lou love you ________________________ thanks for that yo |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
subtle, touching and talented, thanks for the poem. yann |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
you're welcome yann thanks for the words shel |
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