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adelaide New Member
since 2009-08-12
Posts 1would you believe me if i told you i was omniscient? |
front and center, beauty flushed and light headed drag your feet shuffle shuffle shuffle climb the stairs shuffle shuffle shuffle sit creak front and center, beauty flushed and light headed the crux of you is empty again stand up creak maintain your poise shuffle shuffle shuffle front and center, beauty the crux of you is empty again flushed and light headed climb into bed empty poised beautiful flushed |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome to the blue pages. Flushed....from fever or frustration? |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
adelaide Welcome to PiP. I look forwarding to reading more of your poetry. I enjoyed your first entry. Again ~ welcome. Alison |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Welcome! I really liked "The crux of you is empty again." Very thought provoking. I'm looking forward to more poetry from you! |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
like every bit of this, shuffle shuffle shuffle, flushed |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Very interesting first post. Welcome to pip! Hugs Kimberly |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Welcome to pip. I agree very thought provoking. Flushed from what, may I ask? The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I see this as a man [or woman] gone poor in health; I see this as the lovely person beloved from the get-go; I see this as you being the beauty, thus the comment to you...[but I could be wrong.] Ultimately, I see this as poetry. Welcome to Passions! Please, check your email for a Very Special Welcome! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love ~*~ KRJ |
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