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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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another 'butown meandering afternoon just before that turning point sipsation when gentleman jack turns to gladstone amber three fingers deep with the sun behind and easy is the liquid sky without cloudy she said she was jasmine with a z and a y and she was most recently from rhode island and now pepperdine as an doctor of philosophy and she didn't like the peanuts on the floor and why do motorcycle guys like to wear leather I said that was a lot of baggage for an otherwise fairly attractive kind of woman, too bad too she wrinkled her nose as curious momentarily when I said the leather keeps predators away from the tattoos that say bad words out loud her benz was nearly new and the curves too of her drive were almost a highway by themselves she was stopped and nearly dancing then when I noticed the bama/biden on her bumper and shook my head regarding morals before leaving since some places even I wouldn't lower down to _____________ daark (highway series) gladstone amber is 3 shots of gentleman jack in a bucket with the sunset behind..about 7pm usually at gladstones in malibu.. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D I love this story and the illustrations that go with it. You have a lot to say and you say it in a way that leaves no discussion to try to change your mind. Does that make sense? Well, it does to me and, quite frankly, at 6:33 am it is about me. That remains true at 7:33 am, 8:33 am ... well, I am sure you get the point. Thank you from the all about me girl ali-san |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Ali-san. Thanks little one. Some things are like trying to mix concrete once it is set up, ya just ain't gonna do er...this was pre-election and I suspect now she bought a new car or at least a new bumper. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Hey, you ignored the part that is all about me! Ignoring that is like sucking in all my air. Ain't gonna happen. Besides, I like this poem and besides - didn't you say you are giving me a raise of ten cents for each response to your poetry? That's up from what? A plug nickle? ali-sin .. i mean .. ali-san!  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
and in the last days O-gawd will appoint a poetry czar and all poems will rhyme and flow to a hip hop beat...revealedation .. ali-san this was supposed to be a O-bomb so zero accomplishments mean zero responses..now you went and made me owe you big bucks when all I have is change... |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Too bad for you. Now you owe me!  Oh I do soooo like being owed! |
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