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Open Poetry #45

Spring Flowers (Haiku)

crosscountry83
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since 2009-07-30

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0 posted 2009-08-11 08:47 PM

Spring branches swinging
laden with flowers blooming
ready for a change

Rileigh

Robert E. Jordan
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2009-08-11 09:18 PM

Yo Crosscountry83,

This works well as a classic haiku.

Bobby

peaceseaker
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since 2009-07-29

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2 posted 2009-08-12 08:10 AM

LOVED THIS!! nice imagery....ps

Alison

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3 posted 2009-08-12 10:30 AM

Rileigh,

When I eat sushi at my favorite sushi restaurant, I get lost in the beauty of the presentation. It makes me savor each bite. Your haiku does that to me. I savored each word - I, too, love spring flowers.

Thank you for the beauty first thing in my morning.

Alison

crosscountry83
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since 2009-07-30

Posts 345

4 posted 2009-08-12 01:28 PM

Thanks everyone!

Rileigh

zaaclindsay
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since 2009-08-12

Posts 111
Ottawa Ontario

5 posted 2009-08-12 02:53 PM

I love Haiku...I really like the last line because it gives it life and relevance to me.

zaac

Artic Wind
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6 posted 2009-08-12 03:51 PM

How lovely! ~ This is just what I needed to start the afternoon!

ARCTIC WIND

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