| Open Poetry #45 |
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The Willow (A ku) |
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peaceseaker Member
since 2009-07-29
Posts 161 |
The Willow Sun drops as tear drops Just as willow weeps its shaded Shadows of mourning |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Poignant, sad, and beautiful. Nice haiku! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A mournful scene ~ vividly, yet softly, depicted. ![]() ![]() EA |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Sentimental and beautiful words in a fine ku. Lovely sweet peaceseeker ![]() Katriona |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Very expressive and solemn. I enjoyed reading and visualizing your poem. misce' |
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peaceseaker Member
since 2009-07-29
Posts 161 |
Alwye...thank you so much..glad you enjoyed....peaceseaker |
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peaceseaker Member
since 2009-07-29
Posts 161 |
Earth Angel....Thank you so much for reading and the nice compliment....ps |
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peaceseaker Member
since 2009-07-29
Posts 161 |
h2h..I appreciate you reading and leaving your oh so welcome comment....ps |
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peaceseaker Member
since 2009-07-29
Posts 161 |
JamesMichael Thank you for taking the time to read and comment..glad you enjoyed...ps |
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peaceseaker Member
since 2009-07-29
Posts 161 |
miscellanea-your lovely compliment means a lot...thank you...ps |
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