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Open Poetry #45
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
0 posted 2009-08-10 06:46 PM

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Pop
Sits on the bank
Of a turbid water

His bobber trembles
In the muddy stream

I sit down beside him
With nothing to say

Why bother
With words
Since the fish
Are biting

After all
We knew
I’d show up
One day


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Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2009-08-10 09:57 PM

John,

You were wise.  It's never good to talk when the fish are biting, you might scare them away.

Bobby
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