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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Unsynchronized Passion There, to rest against a pillowed mind seeking the encounters of the past, journeying into the summer fade in the dawn of your hold from the last. As the summer reigns come myst the night returning now to a time of song, sharing the moments that came with ease gently reminding with sense of long. Unsynchronized passion, fantasies romantically viewed from tearing eyes. Empty, the place of a second look as intensity extends to sighs. Lost in whispers that frequent the mind There, where passion is often mistimed~~~ M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Maureen, you write of passion so beautifully. |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
This feels like a well written sense of loss. ·´~`·»Brett«·´~`· |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Maureen - passion becomes you, and in your writing... BC |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"unsynchronized passion" ~ As 'they' say, "Timing is everything". I suppose I should start wearing a watch again!!!  "There, to rest against a pillowed mind seeking the encounters of the past, journeying into the summer fade in the dawn of your hold from the last." ~ Understanding this and appreciating your talent in expressing those thoughts.   Linda |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thanks everyone. I was watching an old movie where that phrase I used in the title was spoken and it stayed in my head.  M |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Oh, I like this so much, Maureen. I love it when I am inspired by a phrase that won't leave alone until I write about it. This is so darned good. Alison |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thanks Alison, between the summer humidity and whatever I caught that is wearing me down, the only thoughts that come to me have to be inspired right now.  M |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
M your writing is so gentle and I just think you are adorable shellie |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
As the summer reigns come myst the night returning now to a time of song, ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Soft hugs for the gentle feel of this. Lovely, you~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
shellie, you are very sweet Lori, some days I think about missed moments when either fear or too much patience causes them to be lost~~ M |
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amk377 Member
since 2009-08-11
Posts 58South Carolina |
M, I always get lost in your poetry...(this is Aimster by the way...lost my password lol and e-mail no longer works) Anyway beautiful and mesmerizing...your words flow effortlessly! "we have but a moment...only one moment" |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Lost in whispers that frequent the mind There, where passion is often mistimed~~~ Story of my life. Really well thought out and written poem. I know I can relate. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
M~ You write with such heart and beauty. I saw in one of your responses above that you may have caught something and aren't feeling especially great. I hope you feel better soon! Seems like passion of any type is a pain to me these days. My writing, composing, art. It just doesn't fill me. I'm beginning to think passion is over-rated! Silly me! Who can have too much passion? And to boot, I'm writing questions for purposes of revising/editing a friend's romantic script when I don't care to read romance novels! (My friend is a school bus driver who spends her time between routes authoring novels and doing watercolor paintings. She's great! But, Yikes! Passion--sometimes that P word hurts! If you haven't figured by now, your poem really hit home with me. You express yourself so, so well. I love your poem and all of your poetry! Many of poems are just excellent. I've never read any of yours that weren't outstanding... Good luck to you in your endeavors this school year. misce' |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
You can see my mind is lost today. I forgot to save this beauty! Click! Have a good week, M~ cathy |
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