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Enchantress of the Night
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Enchantress of the Night |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway 
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 Enchantress in the cool dark air Seductive moon I see you there Empress of the black night sky With diamond halo round your hair You tempt this walker passing by Emerging from your sylvan shield You follow me across the field And eagerly with charmed intent Through the countryside revealed Pursued me keenly as I went That night my heart was filled with stars They spilled from Midnight's jewel-filled jars And with their diamonds on display Softly whispering they are More beautiful than break of day Now as you retreat with night You gild each leaf with morning light And leave behind a silver berth A magic carpet laced with white And crystal gems upon dawn's earth |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Beautiful! ·´~`·»Brett«·´~`· |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dear Katriona, that is a beautiful poem, well written in a slightly different style. Please forgive me for writing this but you need to add the word, 'THE' as in 'When you retreat with the night',then the rhythm is perfect. Love and a big warm hug. Lindsay |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
The way you describe nature is so beautiful, Katriona. It always leaves me wanting more. Ida |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Thank you so much dear friends for leaving your kind comments. Heart2Heart  |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Beautgiful, how could we resist to the moon and the walk...Thanks for the poem. yann |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Heart2Heart, The poem goes very well with the picture in this fine presentation. Love Bobby |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Spell-binding! Our recently departed, Marge Tindal, was ofter referred to as pip's Moon Goddess! She would have adored this post, Katriona!    Linda |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Heart2Heart - I love the moon and what it brings at night. You write of it well... BC |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Lovely! ~ Excellent ARCTIC WIND |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Thank you sweet Yann Katriona |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Bobby, I am so pleased you think so, thank you Heart2Heart |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Oh then I'm sure I would have loved her poetry as well dear Linda, so sorry about Marge, I read Oklahoma Rose's fine tribute to that lovely lady. Katriona |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Bill, thanks, I love writing about nature, and the starry skies is one topic I adore. Heart2Heart |
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