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Heart2Heart
Senior Member

since 2009-05-15

Posts 738
Scotland/Norway

0 posted 2009-06-14 05:41 AM

~ Nocturne ~

Hushed is the wind in every bough
The twilight hour is past and now
Dark clouds gather with the night
Spent is the golden day's delight

A night when leafy woodlands calm
Release a scented dew-laced balm
A gentle night that's sure to bring
The tawny owl on silent wing

And listen how it calls again
As skies caress the woods with rain
Where silhouettes of graceful trees
Whisper through the summer breeze

Till night unwraps her dusky palls
I wallow in the bliss that falls
And dizzy moths are just a dream
Around the smooth meandering stream

This fine night's charming place is mine
Where I can stroll in thoughts divine
When every quiet moonlit trail
Seems borrowed from a fairytale...

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-06-14 08:11 AM

This is delightful, dear Heart2Heart! I love it all and particularly the conclusion:

When every quiet moonlit trail
Seems borrowed from a fairytale...

And a very lovely picture to go with it. I am happy that you joined us here at Pip.

Love,
Margherita

Heart2Heart
Senior Member

since 2009-05-15

Posts 738
Scotland/Norway

2 posted 2009-06-14 09:59 AM

Thanks for lovely review Margherita. It's a pleasure to be here :-)
Heart2Heart

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2009-06-14 11:21 AM

Your poetry is pure grace and I am quite fond of your work.

It's so wonderful having you here, Heart2Heart~

Heart2Heart
Senior Member

since 2009-05-15

Posts 738
Scotland/Norway

4 posted 2009-06-14 01:37 PM

Well isn't that the sweestest of replies, thanks ever so much Blues Serenade:-)
heart2Heart

Billie Cullimore
Member

since 2009-03-27

Posts 315

5 posted 2009-06-15 01:34 AM

My dear Heart to Heart. This is such a fine piece of work, I loved it. And the picture go so well with the poem.

Billie C.

Heart2Heart
Senior Member

since 2009-05-15

Posts 738
Scotland/Norway

6 posted 2009-06-15 05:36 AM

Thank you Billie for stopping by and reading my poem.
Heart2Heart

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

7 posted 2009-06-15 07:27 AM

I truly believe this is wonderful poem, I enjoyed each verse that danced on the page, thank you for the sharing of your talent here.

Rick

Heart2Heart
Senior Member

since 2009-05-15

Posts 738
Scotland/Norway

8 posted 2009-06-15 12:21 PM

Thanks Rick, very kind of you to say so.
Heart2Heart

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

9 posted 2009-06-16 11:16 PM

Heart2Heart you have written a masterpiece
here, that was a delight to read my friend.

I'm so glad you have joined PIP. I look forward to many more enjoyable posts from you
Take care.

Lindsay

Heart2Heart
Senior Member

since 2009-05-15

Posts 738
Scotland/Norway

10 posted 2009-06-17 01:15 AM

Thank you Lindsay, very kind of you to say so :-)
Heart2Heart

Johan
Member

since 2009-05-13

Posts 88
Lincolnshire, England U.K.

11 posted 2009-06-17 07:25 AM

I see you have found new friends Katriona, and I see they appreciate your poetry that I have missed. Your poetry is as ever wonderful in its description of nature, beautifully written.

Johan

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

12 posted 2009-06-17 08:15 AM

elegant and loaded with romantic visuals
reminded me of early morning, before dawn...and the so quiet movements of nature...

very much enjoyed

Heart2Heart
Senior Member

since 2009-05-15

Posts 738
Scotland/Norway

13 posted 2009-06-17 01:35 PM

So pleased you liked this Lee, although I know nature poetry is not everybody's cup of tea:-)
Heart2Heart

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

14 posted 2009-06-17 03:22 PM

H2H, Ya know, I never thought about which kind of poetry I like, one vs. the other.
I love poems that rhyme and tell a story best, and what better to write about but what we know.

Love your nature poem.
Tracey.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

15 posted 2009-06-18 02:21 PM

Your poetry just does it for me, Heart2Heart. This is beautiful.
Ida

Heart2Heart
Senior Member

since 2009-05-15

Posts 738
Scotland/Norway

16 posted 2009-06-18 04:47 PM

That's a great standpoint to take WITBAKELAR, same as my own I believe. Thanks for stopping by.
Heart2Heart

Heart2Heart
Senior Member

since 2009-05-15

Posts 738
Scotland/Norway

17 posted 2009-06-18 04:48 PM

Marchmadness I am very pleased you liked the poem, thanks for your lovely comment.
Heart2heart

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