Open Poetry #45 |
Love's Intolerable Pain |
Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
My name shall etch this age of shame In flowing words of writhing flame, I walk in shadow, bearing fire, My beauty grim, and aspect dire. I raise my hand, and ravens fly, They call my lust with every cry, I'll reap the crop of virgin's tears, I hold no truth to quell their fears. A shadow dance for winter night, I will not feel the chilling bite, For wreathed in silk, or drenched in sin I'll drain the warmth of woman's skin. Their passion, given, taken, mine, Is drank from lips of ruby wine, The trembling souls, vampiric kiss, A feast of flesh to feed their bliss. A man again, each rising morn, Awoke unto a fiery dawn, I flee the ever burning plane Of love's intolerable pain. And on that note, it's off to Spain to party again for two weeks. Farewell ladies and gents. |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
Great Poem and have fun.! Yoin Larry Silverstein bought the Twin Towers 5 mths before 911 bombing. He already owned bld 11. He took out "terrorist" ins on them. He won 500 million. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
party on Luke |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Nice 'departure' write! Enjoy your holiday. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Hi Luke, you are a great poet my friend and I thoroughly enjoyed you romantic poem. Have a great holiday in Spain. I went and seen a bullfight in Plaza de Toro in Madrid many years ago. Very friendly people. Lindsay |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Suncleaver, This is amazing. I love this poem and have decided that I am just going to keep it. So, while you are in Spain - I am robbing your words! Have fun Alison |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Luke, it certainly sounds like you need a holiday! Ole! Enjoy! Wine, women, & song! We'll be waiting your return! Big hug, Linda |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very timely poem. Have fun in Spain, Luke. Ida |
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