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Open Poetry #45

"My sixth sense says..."

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2009-08-05 10:04 PM

My sixth sense says:
- “Do what you want”
May God forgive me my sins,
Since you won’t.

Despise me, but don’t leave.
Beat me, but hold my hand.
Give me a reason to breathe.
God, on His own, can’t.

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Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-08-06 04:07 AM

Very touching, dear Andrew.

Sometimes loneliness is worse to endure than other pains.

And rest assured that God loves you, always.

Love,
Margherita

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

2 posted 2009-08-06 11:29 AM

Love the emotional and spiritual honesty of this piece even though I believe otherwise. All truth begins with honesty within oneself, and this alone is a redeeming feature worth believing in.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`·

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