Open Poetry #45 |
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You Are My Angel |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan ![]() |
You are my angel I stroke you face as you sleep, Feeling the emotional stitches That my precious angel Has endured. You called me and said only “Daddy” before your tears came. Two loves are here now The one that pains you, And mine the one That comforts. Yoin Larry Silverstein purchased the Twin Towers 5 mths before 911 bombing. He already owned bld 11. He took out "terrorist" ins on these buildings. He was |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
We endure far better than to watch our loved ones endure. Very touching write. That gentle stroke conveyed through your words. |
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This is Tamma Junior Member
since 2009-07-31
Posts 15Harpers Ferry wv |
aww so sweet... beautifully done |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Pretty. Paul I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Touching and comforting at the same time, Yoinn. Ida |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
I adore the thoughts in this piece. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
love this, so simple and sweet |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Stroked verse of eloquence from a poet. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Extremely touching, dear Tim! You said it beautifully. I wish it would happen between my husband and my daughter. The love is there certainly, but not expressed and then suddenly it might be too late. Love, Margherita |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
Thanks TD. for all your praise. Yoin |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
Tamma and Paul.. thanks so much for replying. Yoin |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
Ida and Garapan. Thank you for reading this and replying. Yoin |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
DLY thank you very much Yoin |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
thank you "M". I hope it happens for your family too. Yoin |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
I was caught unawares with this one and tears welled instantly. Dad's are such angels, too. I watch my husband with my daughters; sometimes he groans inwardly, but he's always there for them. Very poignant, effective heart-speak! *heart* |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Awwww, what a sweet touching write. |
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