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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2009-06-13 11:27 PM

Soul weep music drifts
in gentle surround
violin strings    sing
a symphony of beauty

bleeds softly into tears
  and I ask
oh how
this blessed grace
has come to play for me
it's sweet and tender
rhapsody

plucking emotions
no longer heard
except through the silence
        and written words

held in pages of memory
pressed against   the gentle of me,

It is here I would hold you
  in slightest touch of keep
    as the melody of you
          brings my soul to weep.

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2009-06-13 11:41 PM

You render such a bittersweetness ever so lovingly.

Hugs for you, dear Donna~

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

2 posted 2009-06-14 01:27 AM

The title is as beautiful as the poem itself. Wonderful writing, GS darlin'. I am saving this one.

xoxoxo
Alison

shelerella75
Member

since 2009-01-30

Posts 58

3 posted 2009-06-14 07:33 AM

I love the way I almost felt the soft cadence of a sweet, mellow song through your words.

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

4 posted 2009-06-14 08:03 AM

a 'write' most fine! ...

I am especially fond of the beginning:

"Soul weep music drifts
in gentle surround
violin strings sing
a symphony of beauty

bleeds softly into tears
and I ask
oh how
this blessed grace
has come to play for me
it's sweet and tender
rhapsody"

MUCH (sustained) applause !!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2009-06-14 08:09 AM

held in pages of memory
pressed against the gentle of me,

absolutely beautiful, Donna

M

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2009-06-14 08:28 AM

Your heart is the source of this refined, beautifully rendered song of melancholy and sweet gratitude.

Love this very much, dear Donna!

Love,
Margherita

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

7 posted 2009-06-14 09:49 AM

It is here I would hold you
  in slightest touch of keep
    as the melody of you
          brings my soul to weep.

~gentle...love this poem!

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

8 posted 2009-06-15 09:23 AM

It is that last stanza that gets me too, like brneyed.

Great stuff.

unboundpoetess
Member

since 2008-05-24

Posts 477

9 posted 2009-06-17 01:22 AM

You sweep me away when you pluck those strings, Musician.

My goodness.
Stunning,
H

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

10 posted 2009-06-17 06:34 AM

I love the violin, you can make it sound happy, sad, or weep like a woman...and you have done this not only effectively but with great expertise....lovely

Lee J.

playing.with.crayons
Member

since 2006-01-02

Posts 362
Neverland

11 posted 2009-06-17 08:24 AM

What a gentle spirit you are indeed!

Lovely soulful write.

-Cheye x

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