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Fill My Heart
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Fill My Heart |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Fill In My Heart Fill my heart With your love Fill my heart with peace and harmony Give us happiness and forgiveness I may learn to speak the words of love Fill my heart With my sweet song Where I can walk through his path Follow my dreams Through this daylight Make it right Where night grows cold Fill my heart With love |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
vandana, your  is filled with "sweet song" already! "I may learn to speak the words of love" ~ and you speak the word of love that melt the hearts of your readers.  May your heart forever sing and be overflowing with love! Love, Linda  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Beautiful thoughts, dear Vandana, well expressed! Love, Margherita  |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I tried to highlight a few lines I enjoyed most, and ended up highlighting the entire thing! lol Enjoyed this very much. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"Fill my heart with peace and harmony", I think that is what everyone wishes for~~ nicely done M |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This is like a beautiful prayer, vandana. Ida |
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thoughtfulthinker New Member
since 2009-07-22
Posts 9 |
This is really good I love it! |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
Amen! |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Most lovely, dear vandana. Alison |
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peaceseaker Member
since 2009-07-29
Posts 161 |
"I may learn to speak the words of love" I too have to say that the above was a great vs...or line...liked the format of this as well....enjoyed....Peaceseaker |
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sunnydaze New Member
since 2009-08-05
Posts 2 |
so lovely! really enjoyed this.. |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
"Fill my heart with peace and harmony", sounds like a great idea to me. But, I do think you already have that love. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
the most simple words are the most precious,enjoyed your lovely poem. yann |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
What marvel comes when we ask for love. Tangents become circles and soul becomes reflection. I'm not sure we would ever come to know what a poem really is without it. Soft words, tender lines, and life devining! Soft petals here.Karen |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Vandana, This is lovely work Hon. It's good to see you are in the USA now. Love Bobby |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
vandana - wonderful writing... BC |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Hi Vandana, a most enjoyable write my friend you wrote it well. Lindsay |
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