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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2009-08-01 07:55 PM

Club 98

If the music wasn't so loud
you could hear the
dance floor creak,
the mice squeek,
and the men sighing
with relief
as the club girls
accept their
requests to dance.
Some say that its
a club for gigalo's
but I know better.
If a woman ask you
to accompany her
on an all expenses
paid trip to Paris
wouldn't you
let her?

JamesLee
01August
2009

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2009-08-02 03:12 AM

I dunno. Roniece never offered to pay.

I love this, James.

Alison

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2009-08-02 03:51 AM

lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh Ali-girl is on fire!!

James.. it would be a pleasure to have you visit my little slice of Paris anyday

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2009-08-02 04:17 AM

James this is a beautiful and convincing poem...I like very much the debut of the poem

If the music wasn't so loud
you could hear the
dance floor creak,
the mice squeek,
and the men sighing
with relief
as the club girls
accept their
requests to dance

after that let the ladies decide.

thanks for the poem.

yann

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2009-08-02 12:22 PM

Would you let her, Hawaii Man?!? lol

Alison darn near made me swallow my cough drop with her adorable reply!

Hmmm, I wonder if Roniece's invitation is open to Alison and I, as well?

Enjoyed your poem ~ and the replies!

Love 'n Gay Paree,

Linda

Oklahoma Rose
Senior Member

since 2008-02-28

Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA

5 posted 2009-08-02 01:05 PM

If I had that chance, I think I just might take her up on the offer. Hmmmm! On second thought, I would have to fly to get there (and I don't fly). So I would have to pass.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2009-08-02 01:20 PM

Paris and a beautiful woman are probably irresistible to a romantic heart ...

Lovely!

Love,
Margherita

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