Don't Watch The Hanes Commericals

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Open Poetry #45

Don't Watch The Hanes Commericals

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2009-08-01 04:29 AM

Turn the tv off!
look at those women,
in their bra and panties,
on that tv ad,

What is the world coming to?
don't look! Victorias' Angels,
walking in their underwear,
across the tv,

Put that catalog down,
don't look there either,
there are women inside of it,
with bras and panties on,

Just close your eyes, be blind,
don't look at that billboard,
the one with the model,
you know, in her bra and panties,

Don't watch tv, don't , don't ,
don't look on the internet,
don't look, just poke your eyes out,
After all, God didn't make them did
he?

to see his beauty and handiwork,
did he?

Vs.

Honey, look at me,
I am tan, I workout,
take care of my body,
my hair, my nails,

Do you think I am attractive?

I mean, other than my heart and soul?

no, I can't see you honey,
I am blind,
but if I had eyes,
I bet you would be beautiful,
whatever that is?

Why don't you ever say it?
that I am beautiful?

Is it any wonder?

Where is the not understanding?

of the why?

guys are confused?

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

1 posted 2009-08-01 10:47 AM

OMG!!!!

Women wear underwear?????

LOL

Well done. We can be a silly people, can't we?

peaceseaker
Member

since 2009-07-29

Posts 161

2 posted 2009-08-01 03:03 PM

This was WONDERFUL! Loved the concept in which you wrote it..."Don't watch the Tv" but look at me and what I do for you? Men are blind....enjoyed this one a great deal...so creative poet...Good job! peaceseaker...

Oklahoma Rose
Senior Member

since 2008-02-28

Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA

3 posted 2009-08-01 07:32 PM

LOL@icebox reply.

Callista
Member

since 2008-10-05

Posts 63
USA

4 posted 2009-08-02 12:16 PM

The Hanes commercial I remember is Micheal Jordan and Kevin Bacon, and I only get to imagine them in their underwear.

Suncleaver
Member

since 2009-01-18

Posts 481
Stafford England

5 posted 2009-08-02 01:42 AM

Hehe. Why close your eyes to beauty? If you do, then you'll see very little.

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