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peaceseaker
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since 2009-07-29

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0 posted 2009-07-30 02:15 PM

Night Heart

Darkness falls, the night is still.
Slight breeze upon my shoulder,
belies the flickering lamps.

Light reflecting bobbles to delight
my inner child, still.

Writing only by the candle light,
letting my thoughts roam.
Yawning night fills the sky with
stars.

Now and then you see the streak
of a star sailing through the black.
Its fiery tail waving goodbye to
eon comrades.

Still is the night and there is peace
in the heart with a gentle breeze.

jbstillwater
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since 2009-07-03

Posts 216
Albuquerque, New Mexico

1 posted 2009-07-30 02:18 PM

Loved it! We think alike, my new friend. I love to spend most of my evenings out on my deck, and usually, that is the time I do most of my writing, or at least get my ideas for my writing. Don't forget the end of Auguest, we have that spectacular Mars/Earth convergence thing goin' on. I am already dusting off my binoculars! (lol

Huggs
Jan

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2009-07-30 05:57 PM

peaceseaker - enjoyed this writing. Nice work...

BC

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2009-07-30 07:24 PM

Very peaceful and serene. I do love to stargaze too.

Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2009-07-30 08:02 PM

A pleasure to read...James

Midnitesun

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Gaia

5 posted 2009-07-30 10:23 PM

The perfect read for tonight.
You've shared a lovely peaceful scene.
Thank you!

peaceseaker
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since 2009-07-29

Posts 161

6 posted 2009-07-31 08:20 AM

jb-thank so much for reading and responding..and I will mark my calender for the August event....I'm glad you enjoyed my friend.....peaceseaker

peaceseaker
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7 posted 2009-07-31 08:21 AM

Bill-thank you for taking the time to read and comment it's much appreaciated..glad you liked....peaceseaker

peaceseaker
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8 posted 2009-07-31 08:21 AM

Margherita....Lovely comment...glad you enjoyed....hope to read you soon....PS

peaceseaker
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since 2009-07-29

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9 posted 2009-07-31 08:22 AM

James-thank you for reading and taking the time to leave the most welcome comment..glady you enjoyed....PS

peaceseaker
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since 2009-07-29

Posts 161

10 posted 2009-07-31 08:29 AM

midnite...what a nice compliment..thank you so much....PS

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

11 posted 2009-07-31 10:08 AM

Peace can be sought ~ and found ~ by gazing up into a starlit canopy at night.

"Still is the night and there is peace
in the heart with a gentle breeze."

~ Sighingly peaceful and serene.

Big hug from a fellow star-gazer,

EA

peaceseaker
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since 2009-07-29

Posts 161

12 posted 2009-07-31 01:11 PM

Thank you Earth Angel..that was so sweet...appreciate the read....PS

Oklahoma Rose
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since 2008-02-28

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Oklahoma USA

13 posted 2009-07-31 09:21 PM

Very beautiful. I love to look at the stars at night.

Alwye

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In the space between moments

14 posted 2009-08-01 12:01 PM

"Yawning night fills the sky with
stars."~ Lovely line!

You've captured the magic that comes from writing and thinking and imagining at night. I enjoyed the read!

peaceseaker
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since 2009-07-29

Posts 161

15 posted 2009-08-01 07:39 AM

Thanks guy's....such nice compliments on this..very much appreciated that you took the time....PS

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