Open Poetry #45 |
Fearful Reactions (rp) |
XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
A bird on a branch, near the tree top. The wind started blowing and he feared he'd drop He looked down at the ground and it gave him a fright. So he took to the sky... to escape the height. *** The frog and the turtle, sitting on a log... it began to rain on the turtle and frog. Their minds got disturbed They started to fret And jumped in the pond... so they wouldn't get wet. *** Jane loved Bobby and Bob loved Jane, but Jane couldn't bare anymore pain. Giving her heart made her scared. It only got broken, every time she dared. So she pulled back and pushed him away. Lived all alone 'til her dying day. Cried day and night 'til they laid her in the dirt. A life wrapped in sorrow... so she wouldn't get hurt. *** |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Very cute with a serious note! Loved this and gonna save it! Very well written humor and introspection! hAVE A GREAT DAY URIAH! |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
very nicely done. Your top of the heap uriah. Yoin Just reworked my old poetry page. Check it out before geocities takes it down. Yoin |
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Penwing Member
since 2009-07-27
Posts 73Waverly, MN |
Well done, I enjoyed the comperison between animal nature and that of humans. ,Best wishes ,Alex |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I loved to read this again. It's really so wise and cute. Love, Margherita |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Wise (very wise) and cute sums it up. Ida |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
A joy to read, over and over again. |
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