Open Poetry #45 |
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White Page Of White Ink |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
White Page Of White Ink Tick tock tear drop Drip drip drip drip … Faded memories grave marks Births Drip drip drip drip … Tick Tock rest in peace. Blank page of existence Invisible ink life sentence. Tick tock tear drop - Drip drip drip … Tear torn apart shreds - Tattered humpty dumpty shell Shattered skeletal frame. Dust to dust flames Cremation grey remains Scatters shadow domains - Tick tock tear drop Drip drip drip … Bleeding veins impregnate Cellulous fibers indelible heart Contrasting pulse inkblots - Splat, splat, splat - Inscription White Page Of Red Ink Afterlife blossoms. David Lester Young 07/29/09 © all rights owned by author De-Terminated poet, somewhere in America not on company time |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Impressive rhythm that really shows how fast we travel on this planet Earth into ... the "blossoming of afterlife". Insightful and beautiful write, dear David! Love, Margherita |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Margherita Thank You for your comment, blessings Angel. This is a little abstract but have hidden meanings. Yes the"blossoming of afterlife" of having accomplished something. |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
A very beautiful and insightful poem. |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Oklahoma Rose Thank You again for your time, Blessings. |
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