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Visions (A Tanka) |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA 
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
He must have been a HOTTIE. (get it? Warm, Hottie, Oh never mind) Nice write, Tracey. |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
LOL! Yes Tracey, I get it. There was a time, I thought he was. Memories of the beginning is what kept the fire burning. But, that fire has long since been burned out. |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
I enjoy your Uni-Verse of love. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"cold old heart" ~ not yours, Sweet Sue! You are young at heart and it is most definitely warm already! However, Sweetie, I do understand where you are coming from with this write. Fond memories can keep us warm when winds blow cold.  Linda |
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Penwing Member
since 2009-07-27
Posts 73Waverly, MN |
I must say this is beautiful work expressive yet restrained wonderful but simple amazing job. Best wishes ,Penwing |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
lovely job sweet sue  love ya, shellie my mind won't rest and I don't sleep... |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
D. Lester Young, thank you! Earth Angel, I’m not so sure about that. Maybe it is a cold, young heart Penwing, thank you! Brneyedgrly, thank you so much. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Oklahoma Rose, This works well as a tanka. I like it. Love Bobby |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Loved this Sue and a very nice new picture up of you, well new to me lol your hair looks longer, it's pretty |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
In Alaska, people say: If you are cold, chop wood. It keeps you warm twice; first while chopping, then by burning. Maybe memory hugs are the same? |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautifully done, dear Sue! Memories of the past can prepare you for the creation of new memories in the now. When a heart is warm it shows and attracts as honey attracts bees. So keep it warm! Love, Margherita |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Yup, nice memories indeed and well expressed. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
sue do not fret my dear one day in your future someone else will be putting warm arms around you i promise |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I have never tried a tanka, Sue, Since you did so well maybe I'll try one. Ida |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Oklahoma Rose - tender may the warthm of your heart be... BC |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I've been away a few days...it's good to see this, from you!  |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This is a fine tribute to the power of our memories. May yours warm you beyond forever. xoxox A |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Well done I enjoyed reading Tanka you! Liz |
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