Open Poetry #45 |
Children of Autumn |
firechild Junior Member
since 2009-05-18
Posts 14 |
what scoundrels these spoiled-brat autumn winds huffing, puffing whimsically lifting the checked skirt of nature itself spinning their windswept feet among the ancient oaks carefree oaks with limbs swaying, dancing like gypsies embrace the azure, adorned with a radiant sun half-drunk always celebrating illuminate the frivolous leaves, falling blushing in freshly painted hues of orange, mustard yellow and red such a joyous mosaic of reverie what scoundrels these spoiled-brat autumn winds… |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
An enjoyable romp through autumn's capriciousness. Loved the gypsy dance and the color imagery! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
So lovely and joyous these "Children of Autumn". Very nice poem! Love, Margherita |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Ohh I loved your description of the autumn winds excellent poem really enjoyed reading it I love autumn... Annie |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This is great! Such lively visions, just as autumn. A gypsy dance indeed! |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
A great write! |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
I really enjoyed this and your powerful style. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
VERY well done! Love the title as well. |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
[Encourage Critiques: No] I... I... I have no response to this. ·´~`·»Brett«·´~`· |
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