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It's Where You Find It ( Workshop/Ottava Rima) |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
The mystic may attempt to read the signs the sorcerer divine another spell A scholar seek for truth between the lines a gambler his opponent for the tell An artist some original design the conman for another scheme to sell Historians the past for certain trends the list goes on and on and never ends The sculptor fashions works from wood or clay the painter puts his palette to the test Musicians strike a chord with which to play the joker cracks a smile and makes his jest If you proceed like nothing's in your way one inner voice may rise above the rest Perhaps with just the words you need to hear as if someone had whispered in your ear |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh you just make this look way too easy. The subject of this was also so interesting. |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
woo hoo moose! I like this  shel |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You did a fantastic job! Love, Margherita |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Wow! Look at you. You did great. But then, I knew you would. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Glad you put it where I could find it!  Enjoyed~~ M |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Mysteria, Thanks, lol. looks can be decieving. Doc Shel, ( hope you don't mind, way easier than " brneyedgrly ") Glad you enjoyed, thanks for stopping by. Doc Margherita, Thank you, I'm pretty sure I got everything where it belongs on this, but hey, I've thought so before too. Doc Oklahoma Rose, Thanks for the vote of confidence, lol, please see above. Doc nakd, Lol, me too glad you liked. Doc |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I really enjoyed this Dr. Moose. Great writing. Ida |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Ida, Thanks very much. Doc |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Doc Moose, You do make it look easy - and I enjoy the flow that you create. I like the words too (grins) -- oh, and the poem too!  Alison |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Alison, Well now, I'd say that pretty well covers it,lol. I don't venture out of class very often ( I think they'd rather I stay away from the general populace )but it's nice to get out and see a few people from time to time. Doc |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Doctor, you have some pretty impressive and powerful poetic gray matter between those impressive racks of yours!   EA |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
EA, Thanks muchly, I do try to put to put it good use once in a while. Doc |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
I don't mind shel if you don't mind moose my mind won't rest and I don't sleep... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You could have put yourself and your poetry writing in that poem, moose. It would have fit in very well.........nicely done. |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
brneyedgrly (shel), Lol, not at all, I'm hardly one to stand on formality, "Doc", "Moose", "M", "Hey You", whichever you prefer. Doc Balladeer, Thank you sir, I'll see you back in class. Doc |
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crosscountry83 Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 345 |
Good job on the poem. I tried doing that assignment, it's really hard! Very well put together. Rileigh |
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