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I Believe In Angels
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I Believe In Angels |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
I Believe In Angels Whispered touches of guardian angel signs Sailing currents around a soul’s core being, Weathering birth into headstones final sigh In light wave lifetime devotion of sightseeing. Insight shared hemispheres universal rhapsody Uni-Verse of cerebral introspection melody, Universe of celestial extrospection harmony, Deepest point of origin within - into the Deepest depth of heaven’s musical body. We are the creation of our mind’s pure independence Spreading God’s given gifts in harmonic spectrums, Where we never claim another human master of dependence, But germinate spontaneous combustion erupting nostrum. Therapeutic aerodynamics flight of medicinal archangels, Miracles that can never be shackled mired in vile oppression. Scarlet Letter veins bleeding vain label of venom indignation, Curse of humanity’s Judges Holocaust Hoovernomics tortured Scales of Justice destruction of Lady Liberty’s legal angels. God, a Poet is not a David, against Washington Incorporated Goliath. Behemoths, who drain mainstream lifelines bankrupt into Blackwater’s god. It would take a Potomac Army of God Bless Made in Blessed America giant Patriot seraphs acts to wake up, the sleeping silent majority defiance. Hollow hallow out soul weathers Founding Father reincarnated scrimmage, Why did God give a poet a hundred dollar face, with a Lincoln penny plan? Tory Politicians have decimated the American Middle Class dream image. Where only Whigs “We the people” toil faith finger prayers together stands, Will cast their shadow of patriotism shore to shore, then into the heavens, Where the Star Spangled banner stars explode in blessed, God We Trust. That will never claim one religion, one race, one sex, or politician heathen, But create the greatest diversity of Guardian Angels Of America’s Constitutional creation in birthright gusts. Our deeds throughout History has claimed our Heritage. Our Veteran’s body bag hero remains will never surrender. Every gravestone inscription will never give up Liberty. America won’t be redefined out of existence by “At Will edicts, Where Economic working castes, are again turned into slaves Praying for their Guardian Angel of the American dream. Medical Angels please help me up into the heavens. David Lester Young 07/22/09 © all rights owned by author De-Terminated poet, somewhere in America not on company time |
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norunnin Member
since 2008-10-16
Posts 71 |
No critique, plenty of admiration. You are a wordsmith indeed. |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
norunnin Thank You, your words bless me. blessings to you. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
DLY, I do believe that this is my new favourite of your poems that I have read. I would like to quote norunnin ~ "You are a wordsmith indeed." ~ "Whispered touches of guardian angel signs Sailing currents around a soul’s core being," ~ "Praying for their Guardian Angel of the American dream." ~ Medical Angels please help me up into the heavens." ~ Nurse 'angel' is on her way! lol  A rousing write! Love & Angel Light and the American Dream,  Linda |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Earth Angel Thank You for taking my spirits up into a smile. your words blessed me, so I send you this blessing saying how special a poet you are. |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
LOVE the first 2 stanzas! I totally relate and have recently felt those angels speaking in music my self. Then you completely lost me after that, it turned into a speech. You have a command for the language that's for sure. Well done |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
martiniat8 Thank You for commenting and being honest. The poem does take a twist after the second stanza of the struggle inside to keep going forward in our surroundings that might mute the gifts of insight given us. |
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jbstillwater Member
since 2009-07-03
Posts 216Albuquerque, New Mexico |
Well, as always, Dave...your play on words is just wonderful and I love the way that you weave them into your writing. Masterful! Huggs Jan |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
jbstillwater Thank You my poetic Angel of nature's Uni-Verse with the HeArt of the land's kiss of verse's germination. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Angels know and speak to eachother in a language all their own, speaking, messengers with a message to the world! Thanks Angel for this message....!  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is very complex ... so I will just leave these words "I believe in Angels too". Your love of words is in full display here. Impressive. Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
A Romantic Heart Thank You Angel for your comment, write your wings into success. Margherita Thank You for your words help elevate my spirit closer to those Angels. For, do we not ride our spirits among the currents of time spreading our wings with the wind of potentials. |
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