Open Poetry #45 |
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twilight forest |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! ![]() |
twilight forest endless star fields and moonlit mountaintops, traceless winds over ancient paths on the edge of a tree-swept twilight sky, here … alone in the thunderous calm, life and death; yesterday and tomorrow… all is forgiven all forgotten --- b. e. adams (7/23/2009) |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
in the thunderous calm, life and death; yesterday and tomorrow… all is forgiven ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ You are a true poet and leave much to ponder. This is gorgeous, dreampoet~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Somehow I don't think your beautiful poems will ever be forgotten, Bruce. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Inner peace unfolds beneath those endless star fields ... your words emanate a feeling of letting go. Most beautiful, dear Bruce. Love, Margherita |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
Another fine write my Friend. I too think your beautiful poems will never be forgotten!!!!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
...Just BE ~ for All IS... ![]() Bruce the Poet is truly a divine POET. ![]() Linda |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
can feel some sadness while facing the nude beauty..Thanks Bruce for this fine piece of art. yann |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
secondhanddreampoet - on moonlit mountain tops there is only peace and solitude to reflect on a passing day. Great message in this writing... BC |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Secondhanddreampoet, As you might guess, I really like the idea: "all is forgiven all forgotten" That's the way I remember it. Bobby |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Oh yes, Bruce, a place where you can be yourself, The trees, the stars, they are forgiving, loving you for who you are... I loved the feeling in this! ~ARH ![]() |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
MANY thanks to all who read and commented on this 'write' ! ... as always, grandly appreciated ! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"ancient paths on the edge of a tree-swept twilight sky," lovely as always poet |
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