the girl's not always sad...

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Open Poetry #45

the girl's not always sad...

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

0 posted 2009-06-12 11:28 PM

Diversey Parkway

baby...you are
an unfolding adventure
that i am
not afraid to follow

and...you are
some kind of kindred spirit
with which i
am totally at home

and baby...you are
a stable love
that grows
wilder every day

you...my love
are a lovely destination
along this
precious journey
along my
precious way...

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

1 posted 2009-06-13 12:17 PM

Cute little poem.

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

2 posted 2009-06-13 12:44 PM

~thanks, metal...been waiting for you to stop in : )

~I am the keeper of what he cast off~

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2009-06-14 12:03 PM

Thank God for girls like this one.

A

Oklahoma Rose
Senior Member

since 2008-02-28

Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA

4 posted 2009-06-14 06:50 AM

A beautiful poem.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2009-06-14 07:08 AM

quote:
and baby...you are
a stable love
that grows
wilder every day

Love the combination of stable and wild. A love that promises well!

Very lovely.

Love,
Margherita

shelerella75
Member

since 2009-01-30

Posts 58

6 posted 2009-06-14 07:13 AM

"you...my love
are a lovely destination
along this
precious journey"

loved this part! What a beautiful expression the love and the journey!

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

7 posted 2009-06-14 11:02 AM

~ A, rose, 'rita and shel...thanks for commenting

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

8 posted 2009-06-15 09:21 AM

Love your writing style, very much.
Great 'journey' to read you.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2009-06-17 07:03 PM

Nice...James

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

10 posted 2009-06-21 10:03 AM

~guy and james...

glad you liked my little poem...thanks for reading

: )

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