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for the love of night |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477
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Perhaps Galileo was seduced By vespered diamonds flung Above the vermillion gloaming One mesmerist, musing, strung To tempt terrestrial chains… Delirious with rumors of stars Nightswept in sylphlike dances I wade into the endless moon Where sibyls cast their glances rocking unborn in her sea fingers of night peel film after film of pale corporeal scarf stripped to tremored soul nudely gold I glisten and curve to her obsidian folds loosed in the gauze of her seduction and milky tendriled galaxies weep stark froth against night skin of sky thighed ebon beauty and she permits the comets to lick their blue lapped flames trailing dust across her heavens making restless vapors of men’s celestial dreams I sip her dark mystery evoking notes I never knew the glide of spectral strings in the sway of twilight mirrors riding her aural ecstasies to ancient omsong thrum I suckle divine truths from the hem of onyx lip tossing the curtain of her hair and gathered labyrinths of astral lace she leans me back on silken gravity until she kisses morning shoulders dappling carnal with sugared dew and the sighs of parted horizon pour their slow syrup to melt me on tongues of coral dawn H |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Wow, your depths know no bounds do they? I speak for us all when I say, "We're not worthy!" lol Amazing writing Heather. |
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angellea Member
since 2009-03-29
Posts 144NC, USA |
you make the night sound dang fine, miss heather. very sexy write. love it and you! maranda |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Stunning write, love it. Ida |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms UBP...something wicked weeps in this..like the rich chocolate topping on top of a decadent sundae.. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
unboundpoetess - your words are exquisite, your thoughts breathtaking... BC |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow!! I think the night is very much aware of her charms after absorbing your sparkling poem and she wears her crown of stars with increased pride. You are so deeply inspired and the poem is beyond beautiful and I will read it again, it's a keeper for sure. Love, Margherita  |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
good grief!! I wish I could do it like that...  wow I LOVE this! so going in my library.... |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Jer Thank you buddy for such a sweet reply...I know, Buddy isn't yer name... Randa Thank you for the sexy, sexy. I wub you 2. Ida Appreciate you coming by! And thanks! Daddydark "by the pricking of my thumbs, something wicked this way comes" Cherry...? Dear Bill I always appreciate you kind comments, TY sir : ) Margherita is gonna keep me! I couldn't feel more deeply complimented. Thank you, lovliness. Suse Gosh, thank you...you've made my day! Lovish all, Heather |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
heather this is mesmerizing I wish I saw things the way you do awesome love, shel |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is pure poetry, bringing mesmerizing imagery to life. Your metaphors are fantastic sensual delights, complete with magical stardust and a brilliant afterglow. Into my library with this gem. Gorgeous write, Heather! |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Poetess, What a keeper! I am so envious of your linguistic command! I feel as if I were drinking in the cosmos on a beguiling summer night with all it's soul invading wonders. Captivatingly beautiful and sensual poetry. Kudos!  |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Shel Thank you so much dear one. You are very kind. Midnitesun Humble thanks...your gorgeous means so much... KL Your reply makes me smile! Thank you for kind comments. Love, Heather |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
You are a fantastice writer, and poet. |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Ms. Rose Thank you for saying such nice things! I appreciate you coming by and reading. L, H |
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