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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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in seeking sole mate left hemisphere overpowered by right brained fantasy imagination soles stepped over or on too often miss stepping stuck in muddy ruts again seeking sole mate hoping to regain centered point no sense of gravity fell seeking fantasy fulcrum to balance or triangulate not strangulate the outer limits of my reach tripped again over my sole soul © Copyright 2003 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"gravity fell seeking fantasy fulcrum to balance or" the way this reads, I can see someone trying to navigate the path... very much enjoyed  |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
love you stripped down here kacy |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Always love your stuff, this is wonderful...  ARCTIC WIND |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
SEA, 'romance' can be a rocky road. Thanks, Shellie! Stripping to bare bones writing releases tension, feels almost as good as a massage. AW, thank you, sweetie! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Several quotable lines! "fell seeking fantasy fulcrum to balance" ~ I hearya! Kacy, the way you presented this 'sole'ful poem, effectively gave the impression of freefalling.... Love and Soul Light, Linda |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Linda, 'Freefalling' is a good description. Now I'm 'hearing' Tom Petty. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Kacy, I can't put it better than what has already been said! Yes, stripped to the bare... You worded this beautifully, Kacy! Soulmates, you just have to luv 'em, eh? Another thread, on the race to the library! miscellanea |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms midnite..it is a pleasure to view the branches of this tree side of you.. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
It is a necessity, I guess.... the fantasy imagination I mean. I love this blues, it is a healing path ... which enables the wings to spread again in no time. Wonderfully written, dear Kacy. Love, Margherita  |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Kacy, this is lovely - sad, but lovely - beautiful, clever word play and stream of consciousness. Perhaps God gives us trials to see what we do with them. Some drown the seeds in self-pity, but you take them and look at them from all angles, then you treat them to turn them into positive little entities, then you plant them and nurture them and let them blossom into beauty. Owl |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
LOVE the rhythm of this, I share a similar scenario, well said, thanks for the read |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Kacy, I got a kick out of your last two strophes. Love Bobby |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Loved the interplay between sole/soul. Very nice Midnitesun. Heart2Heart |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thanks, friends! |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Kacy, it is always good to see a post from you. And, I always enjoy reading you lovely poetry. |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Love you bare this way. Very clever and enjoyable write. L, H |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Solar Plexus :O You're pretty wicked, mademoiselle midnite. there is someone there. I bet he has a beard though, or at least a goatee. I hope you're okay with that. I love my dog, and my truck. It's that simple, really. |
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