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ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2009-06-08 03:37 PM

the intake, pondering
jogging memories streaming
a bridging over
of cat tail schools
and landing pads
for all kinds,
monarch and drone
along banks of
swan songs and geese gaggling
scavenging residents,
homeless sharing bread
spectacle and spectator
as daily passers' by,
a stroll or rider's stride
attempting a speed
life presently looking forward
to a moment's rest
side-lined and benched
hand in hand, a lifetime
ageless end from end
love in motion
before emptying
out of thought
into a next

"You don't have to go
You're the poetry man
You make things all rhyme" - P. Snow

Bloodline
Member

since 2009-05-23

Posts 236
Oklahoma

1 posted 2009-06-08 08:26 PM

A good eye to see
your world through
in line and image,

Bloodline

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

2 posted 2009-06-09 01:56 PM

nice imagery...you've painted an exquisite picture here...enjoyed

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2009-06-13 10:41 PM

I like the energy of this poem. You have used words well and they build upon each other very well.

Alison

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2009-06-13 11:29 PM

I like the way your words took me through a journey and then into an ending that wraps it up with just a perfect ending. Very nicely done and much enjoyed. ~D

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

5 posted 2009-06-14 05:55 AM

Pondering is one of my very favourite activities - in fact I have a database section for mine - and I enjoyed your stream of conscious ponderings pulsating with life iMMENSley!

Owl

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2009-06-14 08:22 AM

I do love your ponderings! We should ponder more, no doubt.

Those "scavenging residents" are growing in number, something is so terribly wrong!

Thank you.

Love,
Margherita

Sonofgloin
Junior Member

since 2009-06-09

Posts 48
Australia

7 posted 2009-06-15 02:50 AM

I like to go a pondering, along a bushside track, and if I go a pondering, you may not see me back.....Enjoyed your work.

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

8 posted 2009-06-16 03:14 PM

spectacle and spectator

~love this line, ct...

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