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Open Poetry #45

Wind in my hair

benfitofhtedout
New Member

since 2009-07-19

Posts 4

0 posted 2009-07-21 12:58 PM

Wind in my hair
You move with the greatest of ease
Nothing to stop you

If there is something in your way
You just go around it
Or move it out of your way

But you cannot move me
For I enjoy your kiss on my face
For you are a good thing on a bad day

You bring a smile to my face
When I feel that,
I will never smile again

You bring smells
Of great wonder and awe
Sometimes good but not always

You bring me knowledge
Of rain or of shine

But you don't seem right
There is something wrong
You seem angry

But at What
Whom
Why

The smells you bring are changing
They are still good and bad
But there is something mixed in

The mix is evil
It is changing
The thing that I love

It is man
That is causing a change
I fear the change
But I am part of the change

I love you greatly
But for what I have done
And what I will do
You will become something
I never wanted

so I leave you
In fear,
In fear of what you will become

But remember this
I will not forget my love for you
So you will always
Be the wind in my hair

[This message has been edited by benfitofhtedout (07-22-2009 02:37 AM).]

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2009-07-21 11:32 PM

Welcome to PiP. I like this .. I am not sure what "ove" is (figure it is a typo). I like the message though.

A

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2009-07-23 07:08 PM

Enjoyed...James

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