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She is the Night
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She is the Night |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana 
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She is the night that comes to me And before I succumb, I pray She closes my eyes to everything else And unto her I give myself away She is the night, and I am the day She offers me comfort like a warm caress Felt not on skin, but within the mind I look forward to sleeping inside her And losing sense of measured time She that is different, yet of like mind She is beauty that darkness brings Wrapping me wholly, swallows the light She tends to my darkened garden Upon the bed of second sacred sight She is the giver of dreams, she is the night |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
It sounds like she caught your eye (smiles). Like this poem, CG - it has intensity and vulnerability. Alison |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Thank you, Ali. |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Tender words rendered in the night, very nice Chalmette  And lovely rhymes too.Katriona |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
she is the night and all your dreams rest inside her~ ~ARH  |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
nice n'awlens  |
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Tara Simms Hall Member
since 2001-11-07
Posts 87South Carolina |
Oooh, I like! |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"Felt not on skin, but within the mind" ...and that is probably one of the places I love to be touched most. |
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SoftSoul94 New Member
since 2009-05-20
Posts 5 |
I love your poem, it just says everything!  |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
lovely images, the night can be so beautiful...  ~~**~~ |
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