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My Angel Face
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My Angel Face |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England 
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 My Angel Face I closed my eyes for a second, an angels face appeared right there, A beautiful face shining brightly All I could do was stare, This perfect face hovered before me I swear a smile on his lips playfully wagging his tail followed eagerly by his hips I heard in my head, come play with me as the angel turned away and just like any dog lover I followed and began to play, He had an unfair advantaged as his wings were faster than my feet we played for what seemed like hours And in the end I had to admit defeat Then! he turned away from me and I sensed he had to go So I said goodbye to my Angel Face That had died so long ago.. Annie 21-09-2009 |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello Annie, enjoyed the portrait and homage to angel face, it could develop some metaphor I think, this is very well written. yann |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Thank you Yan I am glad you liked it  |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
I enjoyed it too dear Annie, It was well written and a pleasure to read. love Lindsay |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Thank you Lindsay, that's lovely of you |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Poignantly beautiful, dear Annie! Love, Margherita |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
What a precious poem! They sure can be little angels, can't they? I enjoyed your delightful poem very much. miscellanea |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Awwww thank you both that's lovely.. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Annie, I am sobbing and smiling at the same time. Thank you for loving your Angel Face so much. I LLLLLLLLLLOVED both the poem and the picture. Owl |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Awww thank you Owl i am glad you liked it "Hands Owl a handkerchief"  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Awww thank you james |
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