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Flashback Friend
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Flashback Friend |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
Chased around the table and back again back to where I started and my flashback friend picks at a wound that had healed slipped back into those memories and pictures I dare not stare nor linger too long thinking of that girl of 19 ages ago there aren't many precious memories from those days but this one stays to blow those blue days away I stop to look at my driver's license just to see if my name has changed closing my eyes drifting back to that pale white place and the steps of the acropolis A Solitary Adventure and A Remembrance of Joy...  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Whatever happened in that place is bound to remain powerfully imprinted in the mind, the site is timeless and timeless is your memory. Just beautiful! Nice that you added the picture! Love, Margherita |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I like the poem and the concept of a "flashback friend" - I also thought that the picture at the bottom of the poem had more impact than if it had preceded the poem. Well done. Thank you for sharing. Alison |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
i'm really relating to your poetry shel |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
Thanks you guys, and Alison that was exactly what i was going for and why i put the picture after the poem. |
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