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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere 
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I just don’t have what it takes I cannot dance heartlessly I'm not built that wayward way quashing love from blooming I've always given my pieces away to others found too unworthy lessons learned the hard way repetition is stupidity it’s not a girl~ woman thing it’s just how God made me I just don’t have what it takes and I like that about me. . don't wait for the storms to end~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I think you should go with what works for you, Shellie. Ida |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
me too, miss ida...me too thanks  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~ and don't you change a hair on that pretty, brown-eyed head of yours! You are tender-hearted, loving ~ and sincere. God knew what He was doing when He created you. We're works in progress but those of us who learn from our 'stupid' mistakes, are truly the smart ones!  Love to you sweet ss, Linda    |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I like that about you too. Your poetry continually shows me how kind and beautiful you are - inside and out. I always come back looking for more of you. Thank you for sharing. Alison |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Often what we find hopeless about ourselves are those assets which make us very special to others. Very nice to make your acquaintance dear Shellie through this open and honest and sweet write  Heart2Heart |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Love ennobles everything, it is the radiance of the dance, so to say. You are so right, dear Shellie. Without it nothing goes and that's it. Enjoyed your self-portrait, dear transparent babbling brook. In theory no one is unworthy to receive our love, the gift is precious always, but what must be avoided is the "giving away pieces" ... true love is not fragmented, it adds to itself while it is given.  Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
The hardest thing is knowing who you are. And facing that head on. Good idea. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
might be fun to get to know her hopefully it would take some time enjoyed this expose |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I cannot dance heartlessly ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I think you speak for a lot of women. And you know, I prefer it that way. You're a doll, girly~ |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
You look pretty lying on the page this way. Love you here, Shel Heather |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
I hope you never change berney. Im enjoying you and your poetry. Yoin Just reworked my old poetry page. Check it out before geocities takes it down. Yoin |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes this made me smile. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dear Shellie, don't you sell your self short my girl. Be very happy with what you have got, for we all think it is very good. Love to you dear Lady. Lindsay |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
can I just say... I love you people . |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed this!! ARCTIC WIND |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Shellie, This works very well. I like it fine. Love Bobby |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
You and I, both! As long as we learn from our mistakes, then we're in good shape. Lord knows, I've made plenty of mistakes in my lifetime. And, I am pretty sure that as long as I live, there will be more mistakes to learn from. |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
wind~ thanks for blowin' by dear bobby missed ya sweet sue you'll be fine strong lady love ya shel |
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angellea Member
since 2009-03-29
Posts 144NC, USA |
and I like that about me....this makes me smile. :-) i truly hope that you do like yourself just as you are. everyone makes mistakes. how else would we learn? ;-) maranda |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
well, thank you so much sweet angell it's the only thing that works for meshel |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Please Shellie don't change, the way you dance and the way you are are the best...Your poem is so gracious... have a nice day yann |
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brneyedgrly Senior Member
since 2009-06-08
Posts 1125nowhere and everywhere |
thanks yanno glad you like what you see shellie |
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