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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Lit Looking through the flame Candle magic, danced its flickering light Catching my attention with the scent of woodland musk Lifting my eyes, the wandering sighs of my mind left my lips As blue as yours, details that never fade, fan the flames An easy style of strength and unconditional charm Strung like paper dolls across the walls The very air I breathe, seems to conceive of promise If I read your mind, would I not akin to Nostradamus? Predictions are the rosy cheeks of fate, a blush wine red I sip the fragrance and the dream, pulling tight the ribbons Curling in curtsy across the walls Thinking all the while, “I’m lit” Copyright Kkh 7/20/09 |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
A combination of romance and spooky thrills in this enigmatic write. Can just see the scene before my eyes. A wonderful picture poem. Heart2Heart  |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
 Lit... LOL So many connotations to that word come up...but even second sight has been referred to as "shining". The things we perceive from within, and manifest without... but love is the charmed one, and I felt the magic. Karen |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: You are lit. You have captured the light and put it in words. Full of wonder. Love, Margherita |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I love your flair, your wit and wisdom, and your unsurpassed style. You always sparkle so bright, TD~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I don't know why, but I smiled after reading this~~ a good thing   M |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
I like the colors of this poem. Yoin Just reworked my old poetry page. Check it out before geocities takes it down. Yoin |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Very beautiful, Kathleen. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I agree with everyone else, this is beautiful ARCTIC WIND |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"I sip the fragrance and the dream, pulling tight the ribbons Curling in curtsy across the walls" You just keep pulling these beauties out of the sky, Kathleen. You eyes are 'lit' with magical skylights. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Lovely writing. I used to have a reoccurring nightmare about paperdolls strung together. I don't want to go there - so I'll focus on the beauty of your words. A |
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