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Blue/Brown
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Blue/Brown |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan 
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Blue/Brown Cigar ashes on my keyboard Your Words in my head. Possibilities multiply With each new recipe you cook. Soul speak with honesty Hinting, maybe. My blue ask? Brown? |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I don't really understand this one but it made me smile. A |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
If the eyes are the windows to the soul... Very creative little highlight!  |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
love the atmosphere but don't get the blue ask (I am french), However the poem flows sweet and deep in my mind. regards yann |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
thank you all for your comments on this piece. It is a little vague and perhaps needs a bit of rewrite. Yoin Just reworked my old poetry page. Check it out before geocities takes it down. Yoin |
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