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A Magical Moment
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A Magical Moment |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
ahhh...yes, I love the way your last stanza played...articulating the principle of 'silence is golden' in a very special way...beautiful pic & write...nicely done |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Bill, This is a nice picture. The words in the poem have a tendency to rather run together. Bobby |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Beautiful photograph BC, and such a romantic piece of poetry. Love the ending, nuff said!! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
No need for words when body language expresses and caresses so tenderly Hope |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
Mesmerizing poesy Bill, I am enchanted ! Heart2Heart |
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Heart2Heart Senior Member
since 2009-05-15
Posts 738Scotland/Norway |
.. and your photoshop's lovely, much enjoyed. Heart2Heart |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You weave tenderness into passion and the resulting melody is enticing, dear Bill. Beautiful presentation! Love, Margherita  |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Beautiful love poem ,Bill - you write them well. Alison |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Bill, this is absolutely beautiful. I would welcome some of the magical moments, right about now. LOL! |
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Billie Cullimore Member
since 2009-03-27
Posts 315 |
Ahhh! Bill; Thank goodness we can hang on to the magic moments, they may be rair but oh so wonderful. enjoyed this very much. Billie C. |
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Marc-Andre Senior Member
since 2008-12-07
Posts 501 |
Bill, A beautifully-written, soothing piece. Mark |
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Rose of Sharon Junior Member
since 2008-10-05
Posts 19 |
Bill Yes, you can say so much without saying a word. Love the last verse. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A very poignant post there Bill in a lovely setting. You wrote it well, enjoyed. Lindsay |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautifully penned Bill. Magical and very enchanting. Hugs~Nancy Life isn't about how to survive the storm... |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Loved the tenderness expressed here, Bill. Lovely, Heather |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Magical poetry there dear Bill ~ Enjoyed very much ARCTIC WIND |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Bill Ahhhhhhhhh yes, love is wonderful when two hearts beat as one. Nice picture that is perfect for the poem. Enjoyed. Ariana |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
To All - I apologize to each person that stopped by to read this writing and to reply to it, in that I haven't responded to each reply, as I should. I thank all of you from my heart. BC |
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