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m48
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since 2009-12-02
Posts 108


0 posted 2010-01-08 11:33 AM



thinking it will be ok
it dosent seem so big at first
thinking it wont be a bother
like a feeling you get used to
or something
like a stephen king novel
with twists and secrets
even the auther cant know
depending on the secret
it eats from the inside out
every saine peice of mind
every loving chunk devoted to keeping
such a secret
now realizing
this is the secret that kills
the time has come to let it go
now to  begin the proccess
burning anything written
ripping up things sketched
finaly the real test
its time to forget it ever happened
which wont happen
probably always going to remember
but now at least liveing with it
wont threaten the life
it belongs to
so relax and know this is the right thing to do

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so any comments are encouraged and wanted on this one! please and thank you!

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Snow_Angel
Junior Member
since 2009-12-18
Posts 17

1 posted 2010-01-08 07:59 PM


This is very good. I have really been in that place where something that I have hidden has eaten away at me. And eventually, after a period of time, it did turn out alright.
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