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The Inner Cold
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The Inner Cold |
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Snow_Angel Junior Member
since 2009-12-18
Posts 17 |
The cold comes from within Slowly freezing my veins You made me this way It numbs me My worst enemy, yet my best friend Never receding, always there My only protecter Guarding my heart from the pain Frozen solid No longer here The cold has taken over An icebox now stands in my place |
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kjsd Member
since 2010-01-07
Posts 74sd usa |
this was so good i wish i could write like that |
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Snow_Angel Junior Member
since 2009-12-18
Posts 17 |
Thank you.  Believe me, I'm not that good. Just a novice. |
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m48 Member
since 2009-12-02
Posts 108 |
totally been there,kinda there now. nice write takes you to a place where you have been or can relate to, neat. |
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